Make sure it addresses the pain point that you can relieve! For example:
Are you ready to get more time back in your life and business?

You’re in the right place.
With my [service], you’ll not only get your time back but you’ll also [big transformation you provide].

Hi, I’m NAME, your [quippy one-liner here].
(For example, I could say something like your coffee-loving, glitter-obsessed word nerd.)
I’m here to help you [transformation in different words than above] so that you can [thing they wish they could do but can’t without your service].
Here, you can add a SHORT personal story or a little bit about yourself. But don’t forget, the about page is more about your ideal client than you. Make sure your personality shines through in the copy here, and add little things about you that your ideal client would connect with.
So if you’re ready to [outcome your service provides] together, let’s get started!
